I applaud your submission. My feedback may have been addressed, or I may have misinterpreted your proposal.
1.Some people may disagree, but auditing is an exact science. Reports are based on facts. Therefore, sell any experiences, work examples, references, associates/associations to add more team credibility.
2.It is not a good idea to say that the audit guarantees success in etzvote proposal with furthermore, 30% advisor support. Garnering 30% advisor support will appear good for the community etzvote proposal. On the other hand, it is centralized decision making and concentration of control. ETZ voter principle is based on decentralization and autonomous individual Masternode holders who votes without fear or favour. Therefore, the 30% advisor support idea does not go down well with Masternode holders who are voting.
3.I am guessing that your company is incorporated in Russia. Remember that the risk of audit failure has to be backed by insurance. Auditing can be risky business.
Good luck in your proposal.